Tourism is becoming increasingly important as a source of revenue to many countries, but its disadvantages should not be overlooked.Discuss.
Today, many country's incomes depend upon tourism and promote more to make their financial condition strong;
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has a negative impact that cannot be neglected. Partially accord with Linking Words
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notion and highlight both views.
Manifold's reason behind the source of income on tourism. One of the factors is that travellers come to a beautiful location to experience a new journey in their memory but they have to spend a lot of money. Linking Words
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, the government charge taxes to enter their region from the commuters. Linking Words
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, the local business earns their income from them by providing food, shelter, selling local products and many more. Linking Words
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, it is an important part of their overall financial condition.
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, travelling became a bane to them.
To conclude, travelling to other nations is a good experience for commuters but they should research some news about that location and especially the language that helps them to communicate and understand masses of that nation.Linking Words
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...