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Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your own opinion.

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It is that choice is different as per
person
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, and it is seen that
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 phenomenon
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 with time. Numerous
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 around the world prefer to do a different kind of experience
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 as sightseeing new site, eating new edible.
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, others do not like to make a
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 in routine
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. Both notions have their own pros and cons;
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, before commenting on my view, I will discuss both views in the following paragraphs, along with a logical conclusion. On the one hand, making a
change
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 in
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person
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 require a different thing. The
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 one is time, in
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 contemporary era, the majority of
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 has hectic work schedule
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, no time for visiting our exploring new sites. The
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 one is a personal choice, around the globe, there is a plethora of humankind who does not prefer to
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 their own lifestyle
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 older
people
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. They desire to live
life
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 in the same way as they do from childhood to the present.
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, without changing livelihood,
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exhausting
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 from
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, trying new
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 stimulate them and yield energy.
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, having a different
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 experience is
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 beneficial for a
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.
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, after visiting a new place
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 have experience and knowledge about that territory. In
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 digital era, new
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 relax a
person
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 from stress. If a
person
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 lives the same
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 without a
change
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 in daily
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,
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 easily thinks negative and tired from
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 so, pivotal to do out of the box
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 as try new food dishes.
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, it is expensive for penurious
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. In conclusion,
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 trying some different render
person
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 to
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 and
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 useful in many ways rather than strict with no-
change
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 rules. In my view, trying different
things
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 is a more batter attitude.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Novelty
  • Routine
  • Comfort zone
  • Risk-taker
  • Risk-averse
  • Enrichment
  • Personal growth
  • Innovation
  • Creativity
  • Stability
  • Tradition
  • Habit
  • Familiarity
  • Personal enrichment
  • Life stages
  • Fulfilling
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