The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the violent crimes in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

No community in the world is ideal but when there is a high rate of literacy, low offences ratio and rule of law the society is

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considered near to perfection; Civilised nations have

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traits. The extent of savagery in movies and on TV should be limited by authorities aiming to reduce the brutality felony which is being

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in the human habitat. I fully support

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kinds of preventive steps and in

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being played by well-known stars who have millions of users ,particularly teenagers.

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groups of masses are immature to differentiate between the real and imaginary stuff;

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facing various charges of offences

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impressed to some extent by feature films.

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more power and above the law, which

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more impressed.

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shown as a winner rather than guilty. To illustrate,

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to the drug control firm report, In Nowshehra, 10% of drug traffickers in the rural areas are influenced by movies that

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underworld narcotics smuggling.

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crime growth by telecasting fewer volumes of transgression stories.

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by popular actors and place negative thoughts in an individual's brain. Given

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situation, It seems that the film industry should show all

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as a deterrent rather than a booster to prevent violence in society.