Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothing. Do you agree or disagree?
Presently, several
people
's it is seen that our physical appearance is judged by the variety of clothes
we wear. Some individuals believe is possible a person's culture and character
from their choose
of clothing. I firmly agree with the statement Replace the word
choice
due to
the celebrities as role models should behave well in public and various Change preposition
apply
religions
of the
India
Correct article usage
apply
To begin
with , I agree people
is culture and character
to the business men
personality into the professional Correct your spelling
businessmen
character
. There is a person of the manager and employees to the various wears into the choice. There are a
many celebrities as role Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
model's
in advertisements Change the noun form
models
model
of
Change preposition
for
the
Correct article usage
apply
clothes
. There are modern people
in the modern facilities and better living a long life . There are no different
from any anti-social person like a thief who steals money. Replace the word
difference
For instance
, whereas a school of teachers and principal
are Fix the agreement mistake
principals
highest
level. There are Change the article
the highest
principle
in formal wear in the pent - shirt and tie types of the Fix the agreement mistake
principles
clothes
. In short because of the different people
in are different culture
and Fix the agreement mistake
cultures
character
.
Fix the agreement mistake
characters
On the other hand
, india
is a diverse country, there are a lot of various Change the capitalization
India
religions
in India. And different clothes
to the religions
like Hinduism, Muslim, Christianity , Islam and many more . All these castes have their ideal dress codes. Hindu ladies wear sarees adorned with gold and silver ornaments and males wear pant shirts. Also
, saree
for ladies is the identity of Indian Sanskrit. Correct article usage
a saree
Moreover
, the colour of clothes
which people
choose reflects their nature sometimes. Additionally
, some people
wear clothes
just to keep themeselves
in line with the ongoing fashion trends and to act as status symbols.
In conclusion, I Correct your spelling
themselves
strongly
part of the professional of personality not only various Add a missing verb
am strongly
religions
in the but also
different Indian Sanskrit.Submitted by ozajay9988 on
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