In cities, an increasing number of people do not know their neighbours. There is no longer sense of community. What do you think are the causes of this problem and suggest methods to solve it?
It is generally accepted that more and more
people
have no connection with their neighbours
and lack a sense of belonging. This
essay will explore the reasons and suggest improving the situation.
The first
reason people
become indifferent to their neighbours
is that an increasing number of people
are moving their accommodations too fast to bond a connection with their next
-door. For example
, aim to reduce commute time, most people
will choose an apartment downtown. However
, there, the rent of their apartments and the requirement of the landlord changed often, which made people
have to move to other places to ensure the balance of the budget. They are busy struggling to make ends meet and have no free time to have conversations with their neighbours
. Moreover
, the social culture is changed as well, people
are not expected to invite other people
who live in the same community
to have dinner with them, and other members of the community
do not have a social responsibility to introduce neighbourhood. So, when people
do not have access to bond relationships with their neighbours
, they can not feel a sense of community
.
To improve the situation, people
should interact more with their neighbours
and participate more in community
activities, such
as paying more attention to the notice board of their community
, taking part in activities, and helping their neighbours
when they need to do them a favour. As for the community
, the leader should organise more events that require engagement with everyone and improve the quality of activity to attract more community
participation. For instance
, hold regular community
-themed parties or use community
parks to show open-air films when new movies are launched.
In conclusion, people
are moving a lot and social culture changed to make the trend that an increasing population have not connected with their neighbours
and become a loner in their community
. People
should not isolate themselves, and the community
needs to organise more activities to attract people
to join in.Submitted by baozilyn on
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