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Some people believe that education is the key to tackling hunger worldwide while others feel that the answer is in food aid. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Famine is one of the important still-unresolved issues of humanity which seriously threatens the life of
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 around the world. The attitudes toward the solutions to
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 challenge differ amongst
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. I personally support the ones who reckon that
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 problem could be ameliorated using
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. On the one hand, there are a number of clues why some individuals believe that the hunger issue could only be eradicated by
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 aid.
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, it is widely known that most hungry
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 live in developing countries
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 Africa and the Middle East suffer from corrupt governments as well. Due to
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 fact, it is hardly viable to improve their financial and agricultural systems in order to produce enough
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 for hungry
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.
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, changing the obsolete old-fashioned farms of these areas will take several years in which hundreds or even thousands of poor
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 will die before achieving a suitable result. So, it is vital to send
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 aid to
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 who suffer famine to hinder the problem.
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,
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 could be a more rational answer due to plenty of reasons. By educating
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 in scientific majors related to agriculture, they would learn about methods, techniques, and state-of-the-art technologies of agriculture and water management which can contribute to more efficient farming and producing
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 and in turn, reduce hunger.
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, general
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 steers the individuals to reform the weak government systems and establish a powerful democracy consisting of literate governors to start constructive relations with other countries to absorb foreign investments in infrastructural industries, one of which is the agriculture industry.
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, by considering the mentioned reasons, it is more viable to place
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first
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. To conclude,
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 some
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 present a number of reasons why
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 aid should be in priority, I am of the opinion that
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 is a more reliable and trustworthy way to tackle
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 challenge. It is better for countries to start with fundamental
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 to fight the hunger in future.
Submitted by Serhii Baraniuk on

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