You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter: tell your friend what the event was explain why you think your friend would like the event invite them to come to the event with you

Dear

Mikhaie

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Mikhail

, I can’t wait to see you again, it has been a month since our

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hangout. Right now, there are posts going on Reddit about

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the Russia

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Russia

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Invasion of Ukraine. Admin is announcing a peace protest for Ukraine across downtown Toronto

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weekend. I imagine a lot of people would gather as many online communities in the country are enraged about Putin’s decision. I think you - a junior journalist - will enjoy joining me and

thousand

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of others who

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eager to voice our opinion

agaisnt

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against

war in

the

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apply

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Europe. We all have friends from both sides and it is hard to imagine how

devastateting

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devastating

it could be for them as their leaders are

declairing

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declaring

war on

eachother

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each other

. Your reporting skills along

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with my

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photography skills could be useful in an event like

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. I know you have been looking for meaningful

contents

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to build your experience. Well,

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is our

oppotunities

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opportunities

to let the world know that here in Canada, we stand united for peace. The anti-war protest will be held on Saturday. I have made some signs for us to hold during the protest. The signs are

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the image

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image

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images

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of Ukraine and

Russia

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flags inside of a heart symbol. Let me know if you could drop your schedule to meet me up. I will gladly pick

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it up

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with my van and we will go there together. Best wishes, Nhi

nhi96nguyen.design

Feb 27, 2022

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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6 paragraphs

231 words

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