You have just moved to a new apartment. Write a letter to your friend inviting them to come to your new home. In the letter you should: Explain why you moved. Describe your new home. tell them how to get to your apartment.

Dear Ana, I'm writing to invite you to my new apartment

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Friday after work. Please don't bother to bring food because I'll prepare some. I'm sure that you'll love the new home as it's a brand new building that's more comfortable and

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larger than my old flat.

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it's a little far from the city centre, I found it quieter,

thus

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helping me to concentrate

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working from home. Despite being larger, it's still

one-bedroom

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a one-bedroom

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accommodation with a small kitchen area.

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to that, I have one corner for my working area. It's so nice because I could see a mountain through the window from there. To get here, simply take the blue line subway outward from the city and jump off at the stop before the

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continue walking southbound for 5 minutes until you see the red gate of my apartment. Yours lovingly, Jess

suriansy

Feb 27, 2022

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coherence and cohesion

Try to use more linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

task response

Make sure to include more details about why you love the new apartment.

greeting and closing

Great opening and closing to the letter!

task achievement

You clearly explained how to get to your apartment.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

150 words

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