The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period.
The line graphs illustrate the information
of
student enrollment, international and native in Australian universities from 2001 to 2010.
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on
Overall
, it is clear from the graphs that the total of local students
was higher than foreign students
, Although
the commencing of natives was less than foreign students
.
Apparently, the total number of international students
were
noticeably increased from 20,000 Correct subject-verb agreement
was
students
to 80,000 students
in a decade. While
the commencing students
were slightly rising from under 20,000 students
in 2001 to 20,000 students
in 2006. Additionally
, there were continuously go
up to 40,000 Wrong verb form
going
students
in 2009. It is remain
constant through 2010.
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remains
In addition
, the total enrollment of native admission was a significant increase from 400,000 students
in 2001 to 600,000 students
in 2007. Moreover
, the graphs show remain stable at 600,000 students
from 2007 to 2010, which is three times higher than the commencing in 2010. There was a highest commencing in 2002.Submitted by nurna_nadia on
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