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The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019
#show #changes #ownership #appliances #amount #time #housework #households #country
The line graphs display
the
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information
of
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households
 with electrical appliances and the amount of time
which
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used
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 for housework in one country in 1920 and 2019. The figures are given in percentage and
hours
, respectively. As can be seen from the graphs, the percentages of
households
 with electrical equipment
were
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dramatically increased.
while
 the
amount
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number
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 of
hours
 of
housework
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the housework
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 was gradually declining. The historical trends show in 1920, the washing machine was more popular than the refrigerator and the vacuum cleaner ,
However
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 the
households
 of vacuum cleaners
were
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significantly
growth
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growing
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 to hit a peak in 1980.
While
 the popularity of the washing machine had fallen in 1960.
In addition
, the
households
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number of households
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 of
the
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refrigerator and
the
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vacuum cleaner were higher than
the
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washing
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 machine in 2019.
On the other hand
, The number of
hours
 per week continuously decreased from 50
hours
 in 1920 to 20
hours
 in 1960. It slowly falls to 10
hours
 per week in 2019.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words households, hours with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
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