The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
The line graphs illustrate the variation in ownership of electrical appliances and the amount of time used for housework in one country in 1920 and 2019. The figures are given in percentage and
hours
, respectively.
As can be seen from the graphs, the percentages of households with electrical equipment were
dramatically increased. Unnecessary verb
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while
the number of hours
of the
housework was gradually declining.
The historical trends show the washing machine was more popular than the refrigerator and the vacuum cleaner in 1920, 40%, 30% and nearly 0% of people used it, respectively. Correct article usage
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In addition
, there was a slight growth of around 70% in 2019. However
the need for refrigerators and Add a comma
,However
the
vacuum cleaner Correct article usage
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were
significantly growing to hit 100% of households in 2019.
Change the verb form
was
On the other hand
, The number of hours
per week was continuously decreased from 50 hours
in 1920 to 20 hours
per week in 1960 which two times higher to
2019.Change preposition
in
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