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Today school should teach thier student how to suvive finacially in the world today t what extent do you agree or disagree

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Many people believe that students must learn how to earn and spend wisely in their school days by their teachers. I firmly agree with
this
 statement that education should include
about
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financial management.So here in
this
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 I am going to write about one or two points regarding
this
 matter.
To begin
 with, students have gone through an expensive education system. They required
money
 for everything including their extracurricular activities.
Moreover
,all are having working parents and they ready to spend on their children irrespective of price tag ,
thus
hrlps
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helps
help
 them to live in
this
 competitive world.
However
,
younger
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the younger
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 generation should know about the value of
money
 rather than spend -off.
For instance
, children should learn about their expenses to help them to see the world differently and
able
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 to be
kind hearted
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 towards needy people.
In addition
, learning about
value
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 of
money
 will
helps
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 them use
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them
 wisely,
moreover
,able
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to
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 understand their parents as well.
For instance
,
by
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 collecting
small
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 amount of
money
 weekly could help
thrm
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them
 to think that they have
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their
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thair
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their
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 own bank.Eventually,it will lead them to acquire more benefits related to
finance
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. In conclusion , students who can learn financial management from school could help them to settle down easily compared to others
those
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who don't know how to manage
money
 in future.
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