Some people think that the government should strictly control the supply of fresh water, as it is a limited resource, while others it should not be regulated. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Knowing that
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is finite, many defend that the
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should be responsible for regulating its utilization, while others disagree.
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argument, and
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I will give my opinion, which is in
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of the
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regulating
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usage. There are a few reasons for some to not believe that laws and bureaucracy would solve
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issue. As governments sometimes are very corrupt and without watching and punishing,
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may not follow the rules, the process could become expensive to implement, but inefficient.
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, many
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end up bribing the police when they are caught breaking the law.
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, as technology has been advancing in
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field, there are many new methods to purify
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,
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as machines to desalinate seawater or purify sewage.
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, the
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could invest more in those new methods.
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, others feel that it should be the
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's responsibility to regulate
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and make it accessible to all. One reason is that a huge amount of potable
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is wasted in futile activities
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because
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seem to not be aware of the importance of
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resource.
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, not only new laws and fines should be implemented, but
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awareness campaigns so that the population does not wash the sidewalks.
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, many places are already suffering from a lack of
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and strategic governments and companies are investing billions in
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reserves.
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, China bought many
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reserves as they know that
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value will increase in a near future. In conclusion, I believe both sides have merits. On balance, it is my opinion that the more
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use it intelligently, the more it will be available for future generations.
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, it is the
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's responsibility to raise awareness of the importance and control how and how much
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are using it, aiming at the reduction of waste.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • limited resource
  • manage responsibly
  • shortages
  • environmental impact
  • over-extraction
  • wastage
  • quotas
  • pricing structures
  • efficient use
  • bureaucratic red tape
  • market mechanisms
  • competition, innovation, and investment
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