Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationship people make??

Technology
nowadays is changing the
bahavior
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behaviour
of
people
and changing the way
people
talk . Overall,the impact of
technology
is on
people
.so the way
people
talk has changed.
Firstly
,
technology
is important in everyone's life .
technology
is used in all filled.
however
,our popularity among the
people
has decreased .
for example
due to COVID -19 only online study has
stated
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started
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in the school so our rush among the
people
has decreased .even the children stopped playing because of the study.
Although
,
technology
in changes
have
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saved .
people
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time and
peoples
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work is faster
people
can easily get a job so
people
are changing .
people
cannot celebrate any festival as it is spring in their work so there is no relationship between
people
. I think stream
technology
is more important for
relationship
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however
, relationship act
people
stay connected with another country and
people
can experiment with another country.
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