Some believe that it is beneficial to show foreign films while others feel this can have a negative impact on local culture. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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Nowadays,
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have different views about the benefits of showing overseas
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. While others think these
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can negatively impact the local culture.
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essay will discuss both of these views and state the writer’s opinions. On the one hand, it is undeniable that there are some clear benefits to broadcasting
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from foreign countries.
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, when a country imports
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produced from foreign nations, it can help
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to understand clearly about the foreign country’s cultures and
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, as well as learning about the foreign languages through highly educational
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.
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helping its citizens become easier to get along with new cultures and learn more good things from other civilized societies which could make their behaviour change positively.
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, the habit of queuing for Vietnamese
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, recently, has been formed when watching foreign
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,
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films
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can help local citizens gain more new knowledge and skills or diversify the entertainment sources.
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, there are some reasons against the statement that it is better for a country to produce domestic
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. It is important to remember that
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made by local
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will help to preserve their own cultures , traditions as well as customs.
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, a lot of Vietnam TV programs remind the young generation how to
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The Lunar New Year with vivid illustrations
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as how to make a Banh Trung cake or the meaning of reunion of all member families when every spring comes or just short
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are about how to celebrate of rural
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in Viet Nam. It is certainly true that If young
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only watch foreign
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, it is hard to remember the meaning of traditional values which may be gradually forgotten. Another reason is that the film industry can create more jobs like actors, directors, cameramen, and
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, it is necessary to invest in producing
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in order to provide more employment opportunities for local
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. In conclusion, from my point of view, it could have both negative and positive impacts on
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society but I am quite in
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of the idea saying that domestic movie industry development is a much better choice.
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