Some believe that it is beneficial to show foreign films while others feel this can have a negative impact on local culture. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Nowadays,
people
have different views about the benefits of showing overseas
films
. While others think these
movies
can negatively impact the local culture.
This
essay will discuss both of these views and state the writer’s opinions. On the one hand, it is undeniable that there are some clear benefits to broadcasting
movies
from foreign countries.
Firstly
, when a country imports
films
produced from foreign nations, it can help
people
to understand clearly about the foreign country’s cultures and
people
, as well as learning about the foreign languages through highly educational
movies
.
Thus
helping its citizens become easier to get along with new cultures and learn more good things from other civilized societies which could make their behaviour change positively.
For example
, the habit of queuing for Vietnamese
people
, recently, has been formed when watching foreign
movies
.
Thus
,
such
films
can help local citizens gain more new knowledge and skills or diversify the entertainment sources.
On the other hand
, there are some reasons against the statement that it is better for a country to produce domestic
films
. It is important to remember that
movies
made by local
people
will help to preserve their own cultures , traditions as well as customs.
For instance
, a lot of Vietnam TV programs remind the young generation how to
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The Lunar New Year with vivid illustrations
such
as how to make a Banh Trung cake or the meaning of reunion of all member families when every spring comes or just short
films
are about how to celebrate of rural
people
in Viet Nam. It is certainly true that If young
people
only watch foreign
movies
, it is hard to remember the meaning of traditional values which may be gradually forgotten. Another reason is that the film industry can create more jobs like actors, directors, cameramen, and
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Therefore
, it is necessary to invest in producing
movies
in order to provide more employment opportunities for local
people
. In conclusion, from my point of view, it could have both negative and positive impacts on
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society but I am quite in
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of the idea saying that domestic movie industry development is a much better choice.
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