Some people think that children should follow their parent’s advice, however, others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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in other words
, following these instructions is an excellent opportunity for children to reaffirm affective bonds whit their parents
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also
important to mention that the parents
have more life´s experience and even their have more knowledge about their own sons, therefore
, their guidance should be more appropriate for the emotional and affecting development in the childhood and adolescence. For example
, parents
can give more significant and proper advice
about relationships and sexuality, and they can provide a
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