Some people think that children should follow their parent’s advice, however, others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It Has been widely discussed if younger should obey their parent´s guidance,

nonetheless

, others think different. My opinion is that the benefits of following the

parents

’ instruction are biggest than the disadvantages. On the one hand, when

parents

give any

advice

or guide to their sons, they always are searching

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child´s wellbeing and security,

in other words

, following these instructions is an excellent opportunity for children to reaffirm affective bonds whit their

parents

, improving their process to make good decision and choice, and receive feedback of their

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. It is

also

important to mention that the

parents

have more life´s experience and even their have more knowledge about their own sons,

therefore

, their guidance should be more appropriate for the emotional and affecting development in the childhood and adolescence.

For example

,

parents

can give more significant and proper

advice

about relationships and sexuality, and they can provide

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suitable guidance for their teen, much better than

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fiends

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. On the other side, over-emphasis given to parental

advice

may generate that the kids

do not learn nothing

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about their mistakes and even they can

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an overdependent. To explain,

such

children might lack independent character and they may struggle to make essential decisions in their life or have serious

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their autonomy.

This

would have a detrimental impact on their life.

For instance

, a study shows that many

of

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high-school children

fell

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that they are not capable to make

big

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or important

decision

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decisions

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in their life. To conclude, exist different

argues

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about the benefits and drawbacks of

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or not the parental suggestions,

however

, I strongly believe

that is

essential for the holistic development of

younger

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the younger

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set

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attention to

this

advice

.