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Being a celebrity- such as a famous film star or sports personality- brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

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Many people in
this
 world trying their luck to become a
celebrity
. Because
celebrities
 seem to have a good life than a non-
celebrity
's life. Becoming a famous person has always been a dream for many people.
However
, is it exactly pleasant to be a
celebrity
? It seems to me, becoming a
celebrity
 would bring more problems rather than benefits. The benefit, of course, just like known to the public, by becoming
celebrity
 money would find you.
Celebrities
 notably the famous ones must not worry about their finances. Despite
this
, even though they are surrounded by wealth, not a few
celebrities
 have mental issues.
This
 comes from the pressure of being a
celebrity
. The public always demands famous people to behave like the public wants them to be. Many
celebrities
 say that they feel suffocated because too many eyes are watching them.
Furthermore
, they do not only have pressure from the public or fans but
also
 from their agency. It is rare that a company care about their talent's wellbeing, most of them are profit-oriented. Most of the
celebrities
 notably actors/actresses and singers are work over hours and it is affect their physical health.
Also
, to be a
celebrity
 who wants to have a long career in the industry, they must upgrade their talents to match it with the current popular trend. To conclude, it is true by becomes a
celebrity
 will embark someone's social status but many consequences follow behind it. One must know about the consequences behind it before deciding to pursue their dream to be a
celebrity
.

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