In the modern world, many
parents
want to watch their
children
carefully to make sure that they're doing right. But others think that it is better to let their sons or daughters be more free. From my perspective, I believe we should mix two kinds of methods into a moderate level, and in
this
essay, I will discuss it clearly.
With the speed of development, there are a lot of new benefits for people, but it
also
means that harmful
things
will come along as well. Granted, many
parents
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that it is necessary to have a close supervisor on their
children
to make sure they stay away from all bad
things
.
For example
, if they are too permissive, their little boys or girls will be tempted by bad friends which leads to bad performances in school, or disobeying them,
additionally
, those
parents
do not want their
children
to be addicted to adverse
things
like video games, drugs, etc.
However
, these kinds of concerns gradually turn into being over essential which is now in some families, kids are even not allowed to go out to have fun with their friends, always have to stay at home to study, or even have cameras in their own bedroom which all affects badly on their societal and private characteristics.
According to
these factors, It is unreasonable to control their
children
overwhelmingly.
On the other hand
, Being too permissive may have an impact as bad as strict supervision as well.
For instance
, the most of committed adolescents today mostly come from the lack of
parents
' attention. At
this
point,
while
their
parents
are too busy or have little time to take care of them,
this
causes them to feel lonely, bored, and desperate
due to
the shortage of love,
then
they may go out to look for others' attention, who are mostly bad from the same circumstances.
Besides
, at the teenage age,
parents
need to watch them clearly to ensure they're choosing a good path in their life and not committing any bad
things
. So In both
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perspectives, I think it is important that
parents
matching two methods can have the best approach to teach and guide them to have a good life.
While
being too permissive or strict seems to not be an effective
way
, simultaneously being strict and easy with
children
at the right time and moment might be the best
way
.
In conclusion, having a close supervisor on
children
may not have any benefits but reducing their ability to develop societal skills, and being too easy to them is
also
more likely to lead them on a bad path.
Hence
, it is wiser to
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a moderate
way
to teach
children
in a good
way
.