Some people believe it is best to speak while others believe writing is better way of communication. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, due to the increase in technology many masses think that speaking is the best way to communicate with others.

On the other hand

, some people think that writing letters and postcards are the best way to communicate. In my opinion, I partially agree with both ways of

communication

To begin

with, interacting with other crowds are very important nowadays, due to the growth in the Mobile phones and Landlines

communication

become easier.

This

type of connection can be very useful to the public, they can talk with different persons living in different locations.

For example

, a family member of my friend recently transferred to Delhi but, their family lives in Hyderabad, their

communication

becomes easier by Telephone.

Moreover

, the services of letters and postcards are currently down in our country. There are fewer postcard offices compared to the past, people are using other forms of

communication

like mailing and texting each other in online applications like Instagram, Facebook and E-mail.

For instance

, a friend of mine was curious about

this

connection

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

172 words

<40

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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