There is an increasing trend around the world of married couples deciding not to have children. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for couples who decide to do this.
Many married couples around the globe decided not to have any children after the marriage has its disadvantages, as well as its advantages for financial and freedom.
However
, it comes along with a disadvantage that they do not have anybody to take care of physically in old age.
On the one hand, some couples argue that the decision of having kids is a drawback. Linking Words
Firstly
, the fear of losing their freedom, financial and sacrifice for their happiness, Linking Words
in other words
, staying up late, getting up early because parents have no experience in how to take care of babies and that will increase the responsibility of parents towards their offspring Linking Words
also
increase the feeling of worry. Linking Words
Moreover
, the couple tends to have Linking Words
a
leisure time with each other. Correct article usage
apply
For example
, they would spend on travelling and discovering new places.
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On the other hand
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although
the fact that having babies has a greater impact, which is that you do not have any backing by your side when you are old. Linking Words
Meanwhile
most old people need physical backing. Add a comma
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Furthermore
, especially their bodies hard to perform all activities Linking Words
such
as cooking, shopping, cleaning and sometimes even walking, while they require their children to help them in that period of life. Linking Words
As a result
, most of those who have not had scion struggle in their old age to illustrate loneliness and backing. Linking Words
For instance
, according to childless old people find it extremely difficult to cope with their daily lives because their bodies have little strength and they have nobody to take care of.
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although
choosing to be childless will bring freedom and financial advantage, no one is there to look after physically, which will make their life hard time during their old age.Linking Words
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