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Some believe it is important for cities and towns to invest heavily in building large outdoor public spaces. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is true that at the present time every field is evolving today and
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 a plethora of nation say that the most vital for municipalities and metropolis to spend a lot of pay on different kinds of buildings and apartments huge outdoor public fields. I completely agree with
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 point and
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 essay will explain several drawbacks and a number of advantages of it. On the one hand, it may be a great way for every person in the world due to the fact that population is increasing day by day in the world and
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 it is the most essential for cities and metropolis to invest heavily in building huge outdoor public areas.
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, if every city built outdoor public territory for kindergarten for little kids, it may be good for every child.
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, If in the places and township are constructing to large outdoor public fields various types of buildings
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 as company and factory for community, company and factory can supply with work them.
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, the population of every country is growing nowadays
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 can be the main reason for spending more bill to build houses or apartments for the crowd in large open capacity.
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, just as there are two sides to a coin, there are
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 several drawbacks to
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 topic. If places and municipalities are not spent much more wealth on large outdoor public ranges,
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 can become unusable and it will
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 be impossible to spend more payment on those operations later on. In conclusion, I have explained
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 issue and
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 ,in my opinion,it is the most important centre and cities should spend much more property on huge outdoor slot and
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 is beneficial for folk .
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