Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of the most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Many today would argue that the teenage years are the happiest period of
life
compared to other stages of life
.However
, another group oppose this
by saying that , adult life
is the happiest even though they have responsibilities
. Teenagers
are not having many responsibilities
and relatively live a free life
compared to adults
who are busy and stressed. Since then
, this
writer is in complete agreement with the notion that teenagers
are the happiest .In the following essay , this
writer wishes to elaborate further
on this
topic.
To begin
with , teenagers
today are born in the new millennium and they growing up with the new technology compared to adults
who were not . Fortunately , these millennials do not have many responsibilities
and they live a free lifestyle. Compare to generation X ,this
new generation lives on their own and most of them have a good income .For example
, according to the research published in the Science magazine ,55% of American teenagers
are working part-time while they are studying . Since then
, they do not need much to worry about their life
.
On the other hand
, most of the adult population have sunk with problems and live very stressful life
compared to teenagers
.Unfortunately , they have to think about their family commitments and work-related responsibilities
making their life
more difficult compared to teens .As a result
, most of this
generation would suffer from mental illness or alcohol addiction . For instance
, according to new research published by Oxford University ,in the last
decade , more adults
committed suicide than teenagers
and they found that the main reason was depression .
In conclusion , even though some people think that adults
are happier than teenagers
,most people would oppose this
due to certain facts like responsibilities
of family and work ,which are special for adults
.Hence
, this
writer wishes to opine that , teenagers
are the age group that lives the happiest life
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