In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

There is currently a contentious argument between two groups of people over whether to construct new railway lines for extreme rapid trains between cities or improve present public transport. Personally, I believe,

however

, both groups have their justifications, it is more worth improving public transportation that

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activating in towns in comparison with building external railway lines between stations.

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essay will address both views and my opinion accurately. On the one hand

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view, people advocate that improvement of public transportation is more and more substantial and plays a significant role in a city. What I mean by

this

is that air pollution will be decreased if the level of amenities

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associated with public cars is improved.

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, the public will be encouraged to take advantage of a vast range of subways or trains in order to arrive

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workplace, in consequence, the number of personal cars will be declined and contribute to having a healthy atmosphere in areas. I completely believe that air pollution is counted as a negative circumstance of using more and more personal cars by the commuters. It is better to manage it by rebuilding general vehicles.

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, there is another category of

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who persist establishment of new railway lines among distinct parts of the country leads to travel or emigrate easier.

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to say, not only will be the personality of access to good facilities go up but

also

job seekers will benefit from

further

opportunities to fulfil a true vocation.

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, the

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of various amenities in all locations will be gone up, the population of the society, who are moving out to metropolitan towns, is likely to surge strikingly.

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, the capital cities of all countries typically have been turned into a place, where all the individuals have emigrated to there and the rate of unemployment has been soared generally. In conclusion, I strongly advocate that

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, two brackets of communities have their rights, paying attention to inner systems in towns are more valuable due to prevent some drawback effects on

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contamination and consequent unemployment.