The internet has changed the way we communicate. Much communication today happens through social media. Some people support this and think it is a positive development. Others believe that social media have negative effects.

As a study shows, 57.6% of the world's population uses social
media
and the average daily usage is 2 hours and 27 minutes. From the all the year groups, teenagers are the greatest contributors to
this
huge population. We can see teenagers using their devices everywhere, no matter at home or in schools.
Although
using social
media
is still
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upon in schools,
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some teachers have already started to reconsider the idea.
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social
media
in classes has many positive effects on the
students
. One of the many positive effects of social
media
is the extended knowledge of
students
. As
students
can use different apps to search for information and they can find different mentors and training programs online. With them,
students
can learn new skills and take steps toward their future career goals.
For example
, on YouTube,
students
can find free tutorials to improve in certain subjects. On Pinterest, they can find new inspiration for their projects and on Instagram, they can post their progress and their results. Another thing is that social
media
also
helps
students
to become more supportive toward others. Since many
people
share their personal experience online or their struggles and
students
can show their support by encouraging them through messages and comments. By supporting others,
students
can become more supportive and teachers can use social
media
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to support certain programs.
For example
, donation programs for organizations
such
as WWF or the Red Cross.
Last
but not least, social
media
helps
students
to find
people
with different ideas. The good thing about social
media
is that it helps
people
to find others with different opinions and in
this
way,
students
can learn about new ways of thinking. They can
also
learn about how
people
outside the school might have thought and
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so they can be more prepared when they left the school themselves. To conclude, using social
media
in classes can help
students
in many different ways. It serves as a complementary part to teaching, a perfect example for the
students
to become more supportive, and a way to connect
students
with the rest of the world. Maybe someday in the future,
students
are allowed to use social
media
in classes and their way of thinking could be improved correspondently.
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  • instant communication
  • global connectivity
  • networking opportunities
  • data privacy
  • data breaches
  • mental health issues
  • excessive use
  • depression
  • anxiety
  • feelings of loneliness
  • misinformation
  • fake news
  • public misinformation
  • societal harm
  • shared interests
  • engaged
  • foster communities
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