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Some people think that media should not report detail of crimes to the public. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The development of digital
information
 technology has been creating opportunities for the convenience of spreading
information
. Conventional press now transforms into the digital press, they may give
information
 to the public more massively and quickly. While
this
 development is considered to bring good effect for
information
 transparency, others believe that not every
information
 should be published by the media
for instance
 detailed
information
 about crimes. In my opinion, I agree that the media should limit the
information
 about a
crime
.
To begin
, detailed
information
 about
crime
 action will give an impact on the victims. They may have trauma when they remember the violence they have in the past.
For instance
, criminals on sex rape should not be explained in detail when it is released on media, there is no need explanation step by step how
this
 criminal action was taken.
On the other hand
, an explanation about detailed methods of
crime
 will
also
 inspire others to do
more
Add an article
the more
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 advanced
crime
. When a robber was caught up by the police and the method that the robber used was explained, it will inspire others to do another alternative method which has more probability to be caught up by the police. The press should only report that there was a
crime
 because the public just needs that kind of
information
, and the detailed
information
 should only become notes for the police. In conclusion,
although
 the development of
information
 technology is good for
information
 transparency, in some ways it can bring negative effects. The detailed report about crimes can bring trauma to the victims in the future,
moreover
, it
also
 can inspire people to do
Add an article
the
show examples
more advanced
crime
.
Hence
, limiting the
information
 about a
crime
 is essential.

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