After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing express your appreciation and offer him/ her to visit your home with his/her family

Dear

Mrs.

Change the punctuation

Mrs

show examples

Smith, I have been informed that you were extremely supportive during my stay in

hospital

Correct article usage

the hospital

show examples

Although

Linking Words

we knew each other after an accident, it was very kind of you to take care of me. I am writing

this

Linking Words

letter to show my appreciation. I am a manager in a pharmaceutical factory, I was on my way

Change preposition

apply

show examples

home from work when the accident occurred. I was so lucky that you have been there. I could have been killed

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

if you were not there.

Additionally

Linking Words

, during my accommodation in

hospital

Correct article usage

the hospital

show examples

, you paid for my surgery expense which is shown that you are so kind-hearted. I would appreciate

Correct pronoun usage

it if

show examples

you could send me your bank information so I can transfer the money

Change preposition

show examples

your account.

Finally

Linking Words

, my family and I are willing to meet you and your family

Change preposition

show examples

our house. It would be a great chance to get to know each other better. Please let me know when

your

Change the pronoun

you

show examples

will be available so we can arrange the meeting. I look forward to hearing from you. Dorna Sadeghi

dornasadeghi912Thu Mar 03 2022

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

4
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

178 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

Topic Vocabulary:

gratitude
appreciation
subtly
kindness
assisted
heartfelt
specific examples
sacrifices
safety
comfort
invitation
eager
personal connection
reflecting
impact
reinforcing
deep gratitude

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

6.5
band
You recently sent some documents by post, but they did not arrive at the destination. Write a letter to the post office manager. In your letter, give details of the situation describe the documents say what action you want the post office to take
I trust you are doing well. The purpose of this letter is to express my dissatisfaction with your postal service which I recently used.
7
band
Many people eat junk food these days, which is not good for health. This problem has become more among young people these days. what are the causes and solutions for this trend?
We live in the age of speed, when everything should be done quickly. We don't have time to cook, so we eat fast food as a substitute, which is dangerous for our health.This essay will discuss the two main causes including working pressure and long working hours. This essay will also suggest two main solutions such as improving working quality and increasing awareness among young people.
7
band
Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the 21st Century, and sea levels continue to rise at alarming rates. What problems are associated with this, and what are some possible solutions?
Climate change is among the principal dangers facing people this century, and ocean levels are increasing dramatically. This essay will first suggest that the biggest problems caused by this phenomenon are the loss of land and the flooding of homes and then argue that pollution reduction and building flood protection are the most viable solutions.
7.5
band
Genetic engineering is an important issue in society today. Some people think that it will improve people’s lives in many ways. Others feel that it may be a threat to life on earth. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is true that genetic engineering is a key area of modern scientific research, with broad implications for all human societies. While I accept that this field of technology may have its dangers, I believe that the benefits of genetic engineering outweigh the drawbacks.
7
band
In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an aging population creates problems for governments. Other think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an aging population outweigh the disadvantages?
Many researches show that the number of life expectancy has been rising progressively. Scientists have been trying to improve this trend further because they argue that this is crucial. Although there are those who think that having many elderly people is a bad thing, I firmly agree with scientists that the positive effect of this increase overshadows the drawbacks.

You recently sent some documents by post, but they did not arrive at the destination. Write a letter to the post office manager. In your letter, give details of the situation describe the documents say what action you want the post office to take

Many people eat junk food these days, which is not good for health. This problem has become more among young people these days. what are the causes and solutions for this trend?

Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the 21st Century, and sea levels continue to rise at alarming rates. What problems are associated with this, and what are some possible solutions?

Genetic engineering is an important issue in society today. Some people think that it will improve people’s lives in many ways. Others feel that it may be a threat to life on earth. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an aging population creates problems for governments. Other think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an aging population outweigh the disadvantages?