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Students should focus on learning in the classroom rather than show their status by wearing fashionable clothes. Therefore all students should wear school uniform. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is often argued that
students
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 have to focus on their studies in class rather than wearing clothes that are fashionable to show their status.
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 why
schools
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 have a rule for
students
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 to wear a
school
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uniform
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. From my perspective, I totally agree with
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 statement because as a student we have to ignore all things that are not related to study, like fashionable clothes so that we can focus on our lessons at
school
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.
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 of all, the most important thing that all
students
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 have to do is study. As
students
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, we should focus to get as much knowledge as we could, so that in the future we can have a better life.
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 the
first
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 main purpose of the rule on using
school
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 uniforms for all
students
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. Taking Indonesia as an example, many public
schools
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 have the same colour and model of the
school
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uniform
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 used daily so that even though
students
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 come from different backgrounds, they still can socialize with each other.
On the other hand
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, wearing the
school
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uniform
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also
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 can reduce the feeling of inequality and insecurity among the
students
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. Inequality and insecurity can become a reason for
students
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 to bully other
students
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 and wearing
school
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 uniforms are one preventive thing that
schools
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 can do.
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, in the United States, many public
schools
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 do not have restrictions to use a
school
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uniform
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.
Students
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 are freely using fashionable wardrobes every day.
As a result
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, many bullying cases exist in the US due to
this
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 restriction. To conclude, I believe that every
school
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 must have a restriction about wearing a
school
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uniform
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. Because of
this
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,
students
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 will be more focused on studying and do not think about their fashionable clothes which have to use every day.
Furthermore
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, it
also
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 decreases the feeling of inequality and insecurity between the
students
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 that often occur bullying problems.

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