Some people feel that the legal age at which people can marry should be at least 21. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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time and

certain

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age

. Few individuals concur that there should be a proper

age

in entering a marital status. I somehow coincide with the notion, but almost entirely I do not concur with the idea, all the justifications and precedents shall

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in the ensuing paragraphs. Looking at the least apparent side, why I accede with the discernment is young adult knows the quiddity of

marriage

, in a way that, they can make decisions on themselves,

besides

they have their own sagacity in dealing with their trajectory. The United States of America

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is an examplar

to

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this

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when they enter at the

age

of 18, they can live independently, supposing that they have a secure job and money for a living.

As a result

, divorce can happen due to early

marriage

. On the basis thereof, for the most

part

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I do not attest

with

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the idea due to the fact that

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this

is the start of their career stage.

In other words

,

youngster

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are recently graduate with their

bachelor

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degree.

Hence

, they tend to work more and gain more money to enjoy and suffice their needs in life, they surmise they

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young and energetic, they have more power to work hard. Let us say, professional

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are well-compensated in their work, as they are not yet ready to settle down. As an outcome, they are

career oriented

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and not yet ready to enter to

sacrament

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of matrimony. Another factor to consider is, it should be

on

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the right

age

in finding

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partner

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as long as they are ready and well-prepared in building a new family. Inasmuch, security and safety of the future as priorities in their new life.

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twenties

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, they invest money in spending for matrimony, pre-nuptial and dream wedding of both parties. A case in point is the recent

studiy

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that 60% of

young

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couple

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are saving and planning ahead of time in order to pursue their wedding destinations, particularly they both agree with the settlement. As a corollary,

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age

is not necessarily needed as long as they are stable and ready. As a denouement,

this

essay has presented the reasons why I somehow accede with the notion, but the most part I do not disagree

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the said, it is better recommended that marrying a person should be physically, emotionally and spiritually prepared in order to know the quiddity of

marriage

, for the reason that it is a lifetime commitment.