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Nowadays, it’s not only large companies that might be able to make movies. Digital technology enables anyone to produce films. Do you think that it’s a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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It is recently pointed out that a film company can not only produce films but
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 every individual can make
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 entertainment content by himself by using digital
technology
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. In my opinion,
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 trend is to be both positive and negative in view of a lower budget and an increased
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 of unemployed workers in the film industry. As a beneficial side, it can be
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 said that taking digital
technology
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 can bring a filmmaker to spend a lower cost.
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 is because digital
technology
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 can bring them to reduce the working time in terms of making films. With using digital progress, it can be easier to edit and transfer the movie,
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, if the producer needs to insult a scene into a certain scene, the recording can be insulted with digital
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 beaning used.
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, one of the negative aspects is that there is a possibility for a
number
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 of people who engage in the movie industry to lose their works when their jobs are replaced with digital
technology
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, and
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 it can be recognized the lives of the
number
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 of people are likely influenced.
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, the job opportunity for photographers who record visual effects on a real site may be reduced because visual effects can be created by using software implemented in digital
technology
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. In conclusion,
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 developing digital
technology
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 for making films is beneficial to progress for a cost reduction, it can
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 grow the
number
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 of unemployed in the movie industry.
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, I believe the widespread of digital
technology
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 is both positive and negative development.

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