Today's school should teach their students how to survive financially in the world today. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The public

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different opinions on whether students should be learned the way how

financilly

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financially

financial

manage their money from

school

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or not. Regarding

this

, I strongly believe that learning about monetary is

crucitial

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crucial

in order to maintain living in contemporary society.

Firstly

, when educational institutions provide curriculums with the importance of money,

parents

can reduce

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excessive burdens on spending

usuless

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useless

products, and they can use funds for their children in order to gain knowledge of financial stability. A significant number of youngsters tend to easily be manipulated by commercials, so they pester their

parents

until they get goods. In

this

regard, many

parents

suffer from financial difficulties.

For example

,

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recent media reports would seem to suggest that almost 20% of

guidians

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guardians

feel strains from advertisements that target youngsters.

Therefore

, it is evident that if students are educated about the significance of money, they will not ask their

guidiance

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guidance

to buy products.

Moreover

,

parents

can allocate households funds on education that facilitates children to be mature adults to live in the consumeristic world.

Secondly

, not only leaning financial management can bring about

administration

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the administration

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of allowance among children

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it may

also

contribute to the improvement of

standared

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standard

of living when kids become adults.

For instance

, a survey conducted by the Korea Consumerists Foundation has revealed that about 20% of people who have experienced

bankrupcy

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bankruptcy

haven't been provided

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proper knowledge of finance. As the example clearly illustrate, education from schools plays a key factor to sustain

individual's

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an individual's

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living. In conclusion,

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the school

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school

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schools

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should teach lectures about finance to decrease financial difficulties

on

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parents

. What is more, students can maintain their assets when they become adults.