The use of electronic has a negative effect on personal relationships between people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The
use
of electronic media
makes personal relationships between people
bad. I agree with this
idea, electronic media
are likely one of the reasons causing problems in relationships. Using electronic media
such
as mobile phone makes them not good at communication, people
instead
of talk in person
they will use
text it through phone, when you text, it sometimes makes misunderstanding between you and that person
, they won’t know if you are mad or not sometimes it will lead to an argument. Another reason is students, nowadays students use
electronic media
a lot, they can easily make fun of each other on the internet but when it goes too far can lead to suicide. Friends making fun of each other are normal but when it reaches out of limit like pose some kind
of videos and pictures can be sensitives to their friends which lead to bullies, from friends become enemies because of the network. Last
but not least people
lose their trust in each other because of the scammer
, Scammer
is a person
who commits fraud or participates in a dishonest scheme, they will text you win some kind
of price with the amount of money
then
they ask for your personal information, some people
believe that lost their money
. A scammer
has become more and more sinister due to the Covid 19 the scammer
will act like a poor person
who needs help, they ask for money
from you. Be careful with this
kind
of scammer
, not only this
kind
of scammer
when come to money
don’t easily believe them. In conclusion, I think media
has its benefits and downsides. It all depends on how people
use
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite