It is often said that governments spend too much money on project to protect wildlife, while there are other problems that are more important? Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the invention of technology allows researchers and those in the tourism industry to reach remote

places

.

However

,

this

has problems and advantages. The essay below will discuss both views at length.

First

and foremost, reaching

natural

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the natural

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environment helps scientists to assess the situation and get accurate data for their research. To add on,

this

may attract more

tourists

thereby boosting the economy of that country.

For instance

, there

is

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Diana's pools, a remote

tourists

attraction located in Zimbabwe, of late many

people

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,people

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come from different countries for leisure and health purposes because the pools are believed to be having a healing effect. For

this

reason, all visitors pay an entrance fee to the chief. These payments have helped in developing that area because the community has built

charlots

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chariots

charts

charlottes

for the

tourists

and some villagers are employed as tour guides and security.

On the other hand

, going to remote

places

may cause problems.

First

, some researchers may affect the environment negatively by digging and killing animals as they look for data.

Secondly

, some scientists and

tourists

go to dangerous

places

which may result in death.

For instance

, in 2006, more than 26 people were found to be missing at Mount Calvin in Niger. Three of them were later found dead on the edge of the mountain because of

frost bites

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frostbites

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.

Therefore

, touring natural

enviroments

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environments

environment

should be done with extreme caution. In conclusion, going to exotic

places

helps researchers to get

first hand

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information and it

also

leads to the development of the visited area.

However

, if not done with caution, it may result in

loss

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the loss

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of lives and negatively affect the environment. These and other issues have been discussed in the essay above.