The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Personal wellbeing is a very hot issue that everyone is talking about.
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, some people believe that the quality of life will be worse in the future. I choose to disagree as our priorities and the technological advances we have seen would say
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.
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of all, health has always been a priority for humans and it will continue to be. We are more aware of our body and we are monitoring it on a daily basis. As a matter of fact, we can see that most people are wearing a smartwatch to check their blood level, calories exerted, and the oxygen level in the air.
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, governments and key opinion leaders are helping to campaign for healthy living. They send the messages through formal institutions like the ministries and
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private sectors like NGOs and gyms.
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, technology will most definitely impact our lives. Medical equipment in the hospitals is more advanced compared to how it was in the 90s,
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providing better life care for those who need it. Another example, elders would not have to call for an ambulance when they are facing a health emergency, ride-hailing alternatives like uber and grab can be used to reach medical facilities nearby. Our cell phones are
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connected to various applications so that we can be aware of our surroundings.
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, we use an app called "PeduliLindungi" in Indonesia to see whether the place we are entering is in the green zone of the Covid virus or not. All things considered, I think our health will continue to improve for the foreseeable future. New inventions that humans are creating will serve as measures to how we build a better world.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • 1. Standard of health
  • 2. Average
  • 3. Lower
  • 4. Future
  • 5. Aging population
  • 6. Chronic diseases
  • 7. Sedentary lifestyle
  • 8. Lack of exercise
  • 9. Poor dietary habits
  • 10. Environmental pollution
  • 11. Technological advancements
  • 12. Impact on health
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