Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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not capable to do their
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, the
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a
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chaos. To prevent
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chaos, they should improve their governance. There are a lot of
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principals
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principles
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,
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, health, economic, politics, infrastructure, environment etcetera. Economic is one of the most essential
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among them. Why? Because
economic
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economics
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is multidisciplinary of knowledge and
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linked to
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sectors of
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country
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economic
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could be connected to
health
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the health
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sector because
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an adequate state's budget, the facilities of health could not
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perfectly. If the economic progress of the state could improve it could be a trigger to another progress. Some people think that if the government only focus
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the economic sector, it might
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an
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inequality
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various sectors of the
country
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. High-Gross Domestic Product,
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usually called GDP, is not an actual
prove
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for the
country
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to define the prosperity, but socio-economic sector-health,
eduacation
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education
, politics- does. According to that, it's important to
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care
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of the sectors. Based on my opinion,
economic
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economics
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is crucial for a
country
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. Many countries are determined their well-being by economic index, government's income
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.
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,
economic
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economics
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is a core of many
sector
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because it is connected to anywhere. Without a good economy, it is impossible to achieve
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country's
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a country's
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goals.

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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • standard of living
  • sustainable development
  • social equality
  • environmental degradation
  • cultural heritage
  • technological innovation
  • wealth disparity
  • human development index
  • holistic approach
  • quality of life
  • economic prosperity
  • healthcare system
  • education system
  • cultural diversity
  • policy decisions
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