Crime rates among teenagers has increased dramatically in many countries. Discuss some possible reasons for this increase and suggest solutions.
Recently, teenage related crime rates have peaked
among
various countries. It is important to note that teenagehood, is one of the most critical stages in life, it is the age at which personality is moulded and formed. Change preposition
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, for a teenager to be involved in a crime will have a dire effect on society. In Linking Words
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, with modern technology through video games and Linking Words
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youth are being exposed to different types of violence, which display violence and aggression in a way that may appeal to the teenage viewer. Correct article usage
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recent video game in which the player takes the role of a mafia agent, the player will be given various criminal missions to accomplish. Change preposition
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the young ones to indulge in breaking the law.
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, youth are generally adventurous, willing to take risks. Linking Words
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lifestyle, parents are very occupied, and not dedicating enough time for their families, Correct article usage
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leaves the young ones unguided and may end up convicted in crimes.
To conclude I say, adults should be as close as possible to their young ones, maintain a strong relationship with them, listening to their concerns and issues. Parents need to reassure them that they can always seek their help when needed. Linking Words
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, parents should keep an eye on what media or video games their children are being exposed to, and intervene when required.Linking Words
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