People continue to recommit crimes even after being penalized for their wrongdoings. Why do you think this happens? How can crimes be stopped?

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Some
criminals
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tend to do
crimes
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again and again , even after they are punished for their previous falts. while drug and alcohol addictions and some
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with laws may be the main causes for
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, we can prevent it by a good support
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for
prisoners
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and introducing new laws for the justification
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.In the following essay ,
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topic.
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with ,most
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commit their
crimes
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due to some difficulties in their life like economical
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and under
education
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.
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, some
criminals
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like Island wide Registered
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do their
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,mainly because of some negative points in the law. They try to bail out from the justice and do what they are doing the best like burgling. At the same time , addiction to drugs and alcohol becomes another main cause of recurrent
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by
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.
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, they could be economically poor due to their addictions and try to earn money at any cost for purchasing the drugs and alcohol.
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,according to the report published by the Sri Lankan bar association , 80% of the present
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in the prison are due to drug-related
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and they tend to redo
crimes
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once they a released .
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, most of these
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can be rehabilitated using various methods like
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and psychological support.
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some NGOs is there to help them , there is no proper direction of these
prisoners
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to these units or regulation of these NGOs.
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, by proper
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and
education
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of these
prisoners
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, we can limit the number of nationwide
crimes
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. Apart from that , the implementation of a new law
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for the country is
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important to de moral these
criminals
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.
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, In India after changing their law against the sex offence recently , nationwide rape has been reduced dramatically . In summary ,
problems
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in the justification
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and the mental
problems
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of the
prisoners
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, are the main causes for doing repeated
crimes
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by some of the
criminals
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. proper rehabilitation and demolishing the justification
system
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could be helpful to limit
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