Besides a lot of advantages, some people believe that the Internet creates many problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Many
people
trust that the internet
can be an impact
on many matters, besides
a big benefit. I strongly agree with this
statement because the internet
can give negative impacts such
as health
problems and lost personality.
First
of all, the internet
make health
problems. A lot of society in the digital era is spending time
with the internet
. They can not organize the time
between eating and exercising. Furthermore
, people
have no balance activity for health
, which will impact
the body
. The body
will decrease nutrition. For example
, a person always spends the time
in the day with Correct article usage
the internets
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internet
such
as Youtube, Instagram, Twitter, and others, then
it makes them forget to eat, even they have no time
for doing exercise. The body
has no nutrition, so it give a bad effect on the body
. So that why spending a lot of hours on the internet
give a negative impact
on people
,
Secondly
, Internet
give an effect on personality. People
who always use time
with the internet
will lose interaction with other people
. Especially, individualistic caused by lost interaction. It makes an anti-social person. For example
, we have no time
to play with a friend or contact the communities if you always spending time
with the internet
. So, a bad habit with the internet
can negative
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negatively
impact
the public.
In conclusion, although
the internet
can be beneficial, it can also
create hazards such
as health
matters and bad personalities. However
, I would recommend the community have a balance in using the internet
and doing their life activity.Submitted by miarosmia8 on
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