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At a present time , the population of some countries includes a relatively large amount of young adults ,compare with the number of older people .do The advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays, the issue of
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 youth
population
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 with older
people
 has grown in many countries .While there are some drawbacks associated with growth in
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population
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 the main benefits are more substantial . On the one hand , a potential disadvantage of a large
population
 of young
people
 may be
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unemployment . many countries that have a large amount of young
population
 suffer from unemployment in
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. governments find it difficult to provide all their young forces with descend jobs.
moreover
 , unemployment among
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young
people
 can cause several major problems
such
 as crime .the young
people
 who are unable to find a good job are more likely to turn to crime .
consequently
 , the rate of crime can
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 significantly in a long run .
On the other hand
 , a primary
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advantage of
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 amount of young
population
 is that the country can be developed by young
people
 easier and quicker .from an industrial perspective , benefit from young workforces play a vital role in
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 of industry because they are able to
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 more effective method to resolve problems and they can undertake greater responsibilities . On balance , it is true that
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 a large young
population
 would seem
disadvantegous
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disadvantageous
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 certain
circusmstances
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circumstances
.
however
 , in my view , it is positive effects in
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 of
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 override the disadvantages.
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