Nowadays many people believe that in spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

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Over the
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years, there have been a lot of advances in the way people tend to grow their crops. Despite these improvements, there are still a lot of people who are malnourished. From my point of view, I think that
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occurred because of the low quality of
infrastructure
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in the poorer regions in the
world
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instead
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of the bad quality of farming. Below, I will give some reasons for
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thought.
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, the crops are grown by
companies
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who want to make a profit. Because of
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, they tend to sell their products for the highest price possible.
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behaviour of
companies
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will always lead to a situation in which communities are hungry somewhere in the
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.
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, Someone from Europa wants to pay 1 dollar for a crop and someone from Africa has to feed his family for only 80 cents a day. In situations like
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, a company will always sell its crop for 1 dollar.
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to that, the
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in the poorer regions is not as good as in some other modern civilizations.
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, sometimes it is impossible to transfer all the good to all ends of the
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.
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, some roads in Australia can’t be used on certain days.
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leads to a situation in which some products can’t be transported over the road. The above-mentioned problems can be solved if we can force
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to sell a specific proportion of their crops under the cost-price to the poorer community.
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, we can
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enforce the biggest
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in the
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an additional tax.
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tax can be used for upgrading the
infrastructure
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in the poorer areas. Concluded, If we can make sure that we can ensure both better
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and more export
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we can reduce hunger in the
world
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.
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