yoy have recently moved to a different house. write to your English speaking friend -explain why you have moved -describe the new house -invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Serene,
It’s been so long since I’ve heard from you. I hope you are doing well. I’m pretty great despite working very hard lately. Anyway, I’m writing to say that we
finally
moved to a bigger house
, as we’ve always dreamed.
Change preposition
of.
However
, we had a stronger force for doing this
action now, me
and John are Change the pronoun
I
waiting
our Add the preposition
forwaiting
first
baby.
Although
our previous house
had 2 bedrooms, now we really need a third
one,
and a large back yard. In the new Remove the comma
apply
house
, as you enter, you are able to see that it has high a sealing, that goes throughout the whole house
. There are two bathrooms, one in our suit
master and Correct your spelling
suite
other
for guests. Correct article usage
the other
In addition
, there is this
huge back yard
with a barbecue area and a swimming pool. In sum, the Correct your spelling
backyard
house
is spectacular.
Because we haven’t seen each other for so long, we would like to invite you and your husband to spend Thanks Given with us. If it is not possible, we can reschedule to a different time that better suits you.
Please let me know what are your preferences.
Best regards,
Christina Smith.Submitted by gislainemelega on
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