Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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, stalked by strangers.
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with, some social Linking Words
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users do not have self-confidence so they become thieves in a modernized way and they steal Use synonyms
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or to do illegal things on behalf of someone else. Use synonyms
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, one of my friend's identities was stolen by an anonymous user who shared inappropriate posts and Linking Words
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caused issues for my friend. Linking Words
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may not happen to her if she did not share her personal Linking Words
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as home address and phone number will lead to other risks since there are many creepy people who are using social Linking Words
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for wrong purposes like stalking and harassment. Stalkers can use our Use synonyms
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in order to find our location and start stalking. Use synonyms
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happens to many girls and boys especially, teenagers. We can not underestimate sharing our Linking Words
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will lead to having a stalker who goes where ever you go.
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on social Use synonyms
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lead to identity theft or being followed by a strange stalker. In my point of view, these two problems are enough to stop us from sharing our private Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite