You live with a roommate at university but you have trouble studying because of a problem related to your roommate. Write a letter to an administrator at your university and include: Who you are The problem What you suggest they do

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Dear sir or Madam, I am a

first

-year

student

University

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the University

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of York. I

first

came here on

the

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student

Visa a few months ago from Vietnam and

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currently enrolling full-time at school. My major is in transportation design. I am living in East

student

doom and I am writing

this

to report about my roommate. My roommate is a

second

-year

student

from Mexico, he has been aggressive toward me recently after I came out as a queer person. I have had no problem with him being drunk but after I introduced my

true-self

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to him a month ago when we were hanging out, I have noticed an increase in

homophobic

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the homophobic

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term

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terms

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being used by him against me in school and on social media

such

as “gay” and “

unatural

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unnatural

natural

”. The differences in our point of view have brought upon us multiple arguments and physical

fight

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. I have been

depressing

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lately and could no longer focus on studying. While I am sorry that my roommate thought I am a threat to him and society, I am

also

angry and sad that I am being discriminated

and

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against and

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don’t know

who

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to seek help from. I hope that the administrative board of York University will notice my voice and help implement rules to protect and support the LGBTQ+

vunerable

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vulnerable

minority. In the

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meantime

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mean time

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, I would like to request changing campus, or

atleast

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at least

let me move to another room on another floor. I appreciate your effort in

this

matter. Looking forward to your response, Nhi Phuong

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The Closing

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Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

254 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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The Closing

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