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More and more people want to buy clothes, cars and other products from well-known brands. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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Nowadays, many
people
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 think that buying something should purchase these
products
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 from reputation and credibility
brands
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 because the market has artificial
products
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 which are
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 original
brands
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. A reason to support my idea will be outlined in the following paragraph. The consumer can easily find the goods and
products
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 which are spreading around the world. So,
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 causes many problems to
people
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.
As a result
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, solutions for breaking the problems are purchase
products
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 from well-known
brands
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 which are many advantages,
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, they have a guarantee for the consumer which faces the
problem
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 of their
products
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 because a little mistake will occur in every occasion and they can solve these problems immediately
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 as when consumer buy the car from their company,
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 the car has a
problem
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 in gear, the company is the responsibility of the
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 and find the way to break
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problem
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,
people
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 who buy the product from well-known
brands
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 make relaxed for them because they are not worried about the credibility of
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 brand.
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, when some consumers face the artificial product, if they buy it from an unreliable source, so it cannot receive many benefits which are mentioned in the paragraph and
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, prices of these
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 are the different range, it depends on affording of each
people
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. In conclusion, in the present day, many companies try to create an awareness of their brand for knowing of
people
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. After that, when companies have well-known
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 they must keep the sustainable prominence, image and faithfulness of their
brands
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. these are the reason for the development in a good way.
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.

A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).

Stick to this essay structure:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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