Rising university fees as a result students prefer practical degree courses. Agree or disagree?

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It is often said that nowadays about the role of the university in society for pupils and different useful
courses
. A lot of students after finishing
their
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high school want to study in an important educational organization. From my point of view, students should to choice
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educational
future
for themselves. I partly agree with
this
point and explain the reasons for
this
in the below essay.
To begin
with, today's
universities
are much prefer
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option
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for boys and girls. There is no denying that most of
them
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parents do not
choice
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a
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different small practical degree
courses
for their children, they prefer
a
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big and famous
universities
or colleges.
For example
, if
this
child lived in
parents'
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their parents'
his parents'
her parents'
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house, he should respect
mothers'
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his mothers'
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and fathers'
prefer
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. We all know
a
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young people, most of them in eighteen ages do not know
that
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they will do in
future
.
Therefore
, in
modern
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world,
reputation
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the reputation
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of
university
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the university
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in
future
students' eyes is very strong and clear, just because pupils prefer university
than
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courses
.
In contrast
to the above point, practical
courses
are cheaper than
universities
' programs.
For instance
, more poor people can not
to
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study in expensive faculties,
however
, they need to get professional skills and knowledge for their
future
and economy independent. Practical degree
courses
are perfect options for these people.
In addition
,
courses
required
a
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fewer hours for getting a specialisation, skills and diploma than
universities
' programs. In conclusion, I partly agree with
this
idea. In my opinion,
universities
more
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popular than practical
courses
, but these
courses
a cheaper and required
less
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hours for getting professional skills and
diploma
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.
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