Many people today, especially in the developed world, are choosing to have fewer children, or none at all. Why is this happening, and do you think it is a good trend?
Parents in the current era, especially in rich countries try to limit the number of children in their families. Busy lifestyle and age limitations could be the basis for
this
development
and Since this
may lead to the extinction of mankind, this
writer is in complete disagreement with the above development
.
To begin
with , with the improvement of the standards of living ,communities around the globe have had limited time to entertain themself and their family. As a result
, they have postponed their marriage and tried to earn and learn as much as possible. unfortunately , this
has led to a situation where most of the couples were unable to conceive or limit their family due to their advanced age . For instance
, according to research conducted by Oxford University, in the last
decade, the UK has shown the lowest birth rate in their history and the main reason was the advanced age of the couples .
On the contrary
, this
unfortunate development
may lead to some devastating situations in the future .furthermore
, As most countries show negative birth rates , their population would constrict more in the future and, in a situation like natural disasters , this
may be intensified . For example
, according to the statistical data published by Finland , in 2050 the population of Finland would be reduced by 25% from the current population and this
may increase if some actions would not take place .
In conclusion , as a result
of delayed marriage and a busy lifestyle , most parents would opine to limit their family number , even though this
may lead to the extinction of mankind .Considering all this
, this
writer wishes to opine that , this
development
is very bad for mankind and world leaders must study further
on this
development
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