Children in many countries are eating more fast food and convenience snacks. Why are children doing this and hoxw serious are the consequences?
In recent times, the amount of junk
food
that young people eat has increased in many countries. This
essay will analyze firstly
the reason for this
rise and secondly
why this
is an
significant issue for Change the article
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children
.
In modern times, parents use most of their time
working, sleeping or commuting. That is
why there is a need of doing the housework in the shortest time
possible, and one way of achieving this
is buying fast food
and convenience snacks because it is fast and relatively cheap. In addition
, TV and internet advertising of junk food
is targeted to children
so that they ask their parents to buy it. An example of this
is a website of a cookie company that has advertisements disguised as videogames in order to make children
remember their product and crave it.
The main problem with this
behaviour is that it damages children
's health. This
will have future negative effects beyond health such
as poor academic performace
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performance
Furthermore
, this
will bring adverse consequences to the
society in the long term because it will reduce productivityCorrect article usage
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,
because an unhealthy worker is less productive. To prove Remove the comma
apply
this
assertion is very simple: Countries like Japan with a
very reduced fast Correct article usage
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food
consumption have much higher productivity than those where junk food
is ubiquitous.
to sum up, these new alimentary habits caused by the lack of time
of modern time
families and fast food
and snacks advertising will have negative consequences not only to children
's health but also
to their academic performance and, in the long term even to the countries productivity.Submitted by ignaciogigli on
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