Children in many countries are eating more fast food and convenience snacks. Why are children doing this and hoxw serious are the consequences?
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and convenience snacks because it is fast and relatively cheap. Use synonyms
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so that they ask their parents to buy it. An example of Use synonyms
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is a website of a cookie company that has advertisements disguised as videogames in order to make Linking Words
children
remember their product and crave it.
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behaviour is that it damages Linking Words
children
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assertion is very simple: Countries like Japan with Linking Words
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consumption have much higher productivity than those where junk Use synonyms
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to sum up, these new alimentary habits caused by the lack of Use synonyms
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
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Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
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