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Some people say it’s a waste of time to plan for the future. We should live in the present. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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A group of
people
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 claim it is better to live in the present
instead
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 of planning too much for the
future
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, it seems to them a waste of time. The reason for
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 is because many
people
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 seem to have different visions about
life
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, while some
people
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 believe and work for their
future
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 others just enjoy the moment without planning things
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. I disagree with the statement because I believe that if you have a dream and you want to succeed in
life
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 you need to have a plan
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 and
then
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 work
towards
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 of ,all
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 is a modern
life
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 concept that teaches the crowd to release anxiety and stress for the
future
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. Many
people
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 especially young
people
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 believe that thas represent freedom. ,
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Moreover
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 there are many examples
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 as the popular book Live is a Moment by Lina Strell, and the Importance of the present by Marck Smith. The objective of the book is to help
people
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 to handle their time consciousness.
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future
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 is often surprising and many factors could ruin plans for the
future
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.
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, since the recent Covid-19 pandemic hits, it change the plans for millions of population who plan to open their business or travel abroad for jobs or leisure and society get sick and frustrated for
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 reason. To sum up, a large number of
people
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 say that
life
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 is a moment, planning for the
future
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 is west of time and enjoying
life
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 is their philosophy of
life
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, but for other individuals is more important to have goals in
life
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 and achieve their dreams. One solution to
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 is to balance between enjoying the moments and working for your goals.
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