In the future, nobody wiil buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Over a few decades, internet evolvement and digitalisation allow everyone to read everything online freely

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may drive people to abandon paper-based

newspapers

and

books

. I do believe that

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circumstance is

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most-likely

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to happen in the future due to online-information abundance and people’s awareness

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environment

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. The very

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reason why human being prefers reading online

literatures

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literature

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to paper-based information is the abundance of online sources that

allows

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people to easily access and read them even for free. The major factor making

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happen is the

internet

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rapid-development

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. Following

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that, social media’s massive growth supports the availability of the latest information.

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is definitely advantageous for mankind to save their money from newspaper monthly

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Furthermore

, soft-file

books

are much easier to store. We don’t need to provide a spacious room for building a library.

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makes paper-based

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become

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obsolete to

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eyes. Another reason that shifts

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reading behaviour to internet-based is the significant rise of people’s awareness towards

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. Go-green habit (movement), particularly paperless preference, has been driving mankind’s thought to reduce or even to avoid paper use by massive campaigns. The thing is the more people read

newspapers

and

books

; the more trees that are cut down. By not reading conventional

newspapers

and

books

, it means that we have participated to combat

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excessive paper use. In a nutshell, I believe that the paperless trend will drive people’s preference to read internet-based

literatures

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literature

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(i.e.:

newspapers

and

books

) in the future.

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trend is

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unstoppable

amidst

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world citizens.

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