In the future, nobody wiil buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Over a few decades, internet evolvement and digitalisation allow everyone to read everything online freely
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may drive people to abandon paper-based
newspapers
and
books
. I do believe that
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circumstance is
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to happen in the future due to online-information abundance and people’s awareness
towards
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environment
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. The very
first
reason why human being prefers reading online
literatures
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to paper-based information is the abundance of online sources that
allows
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people to easily access and read them even for free. The major factor making
this
happen is the
internet
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rapid-development
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. Following
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that, social media’s massive growth supports the availability of the latest information.
This
is definitely advantageous for mankind to save their money from newspaper monthly
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.
Furthermore
, soft-file
books
are much easier to store. We don’t need to provide a spacious room for building a library.
This
makes paper-based
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become
something
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obsolete to
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eyes. Another reason that shifts
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reading behaviour to internet-based is the significant rise of people’s awareness towards
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. Go-green habit (movement), particularly paperless preference, has been driving mankind’s thought to reduce or even to avoid paper use by massive campaigns. The thing is the more people read
newspapers
and
books
; the more trees that are cut down. By not reading conventional
newspapers
and
books
, it means that we have participated to combat
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excessive paper use. In a nutshell, I believe that the paperless trend will drive people’s preference to read internet-based
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(i.e.:
newspapers
and
books
) in the future.
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trend is
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unstoppable
amidst
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world citizens.
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