Nowadays, it is increasingly more difficult to maintain the right balance between work and other aspects of one’s life, such as time with family and leisure needs. How important do you think is this balance? Why do people find it hard to achieve?
Work-life balance is one of the new generation problems. Employees tend to forget their family and happiness in the pursuit of becoming richer.
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leads to an alarming situation that has to be tackled with utmost priority. The following passage describes the significance of balancing different aspects and how to achieve the same.
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Firstly
, an imbalanced life leads to stress. Linking Words
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affects an individual's physical and mental health and Linking Words
also
causes social problems. Linking Words
For instance
, a person who feels stressed will take the support of alcohol which unleashes his anger and leads to social menace. Linking Words
Secondly
, it causes family issues. Improper balancing of family and work can cause disputes in family life. Linking Words
Moreover
, recent studies have pointed out that most divorces happened because of the workaholic nature of either life partner.
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On the other hand
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this
problem could be easily eliminated by creating a good atmosphere. Employees should be given enough off days to spend with the family and in case there is a higher workload on specific days Linking Words
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as the end of the month or year, workers should be given compensation off days after that hectic schedule.
In conclusion, modern problems require modern solutions and employers have to take steps to improve the office atmosphere of their employees so as to improve their efficiency.Linking Words
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