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Some people think that government should take care of disadvantaged people such as unemployees or the homeless. Do you agree or disagree

#people #government #care #unemployees
A certain number of people believes disadvantaged
citizen's
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citizens'
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care
 is
government's
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the government's
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 responsibility but others believe that they should
care
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themselves. In
this
 essay I will elaborate why I am
completly
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completely
 agrees with higher authority should take
care
 of
underprivilaged
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underprivileged
 people. To commence with, it is very appreciatable discission that
government
 is taking
care
 for poor and backward
religous
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religious
 communities by giving
stipent
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stipend
 for elderly ,
scholership
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scholarship
scholarships
 for students, and house for homeless.
For instance
,
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the India
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India
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government
 is providing home for below poverty line citizens.
In addition
 to that free education for SCST group and so many
scholership
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scholarship
scholarships
 for raising that community.
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 support
fron
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from
 the
authories
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authorises
 gave them
a
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the
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 mental strength to face their disabilities.
Addition
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 to that,
Goverment
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Government
 can provide monthly cereals and grains and some groceries to
poor
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the poor
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 to vomit poverty. Mentally and physically disabled citizens
maynot
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may not
able
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be able
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 to find
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a job
the job
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job
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jobs
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 to feed themselves. so the ration will be
great
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a great
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 relief for them.
For example
, Researches find that with the help of
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government
goverment
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the goverment
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kerala
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Kerala
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become
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becomes
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100
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a 100
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percent
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per cent
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poverty free
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poverty-free
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 state. To conclude, education, food and shelter are three basic
necessity
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necessities
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 for a person. With the
Government
's
support
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,support
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 disadvantaged persons can
led
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lead
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 there life
stress free
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stress-free
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 and I strongly support for
this
 discission
Submitted by BINI K ISSAC on

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